Thursday, 12 March 2015

As part of our writing programme we are choosing one of our stories to publish onto the blog. Here is Lily's story she wrote when given a picture.

 




This is Lily and she is going on a  bumpy ride on her bottom. It must hurt her bottom on that bump but it must be scarey going down on the sack. She must have a sack because it must hurt her bottom if she didnt have a sack. Her Dad is doing it to.
by Lily

1 comment:

  1. what a great story Lily,I bet it was scary but fun.Well done.Nana

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